Reading Interview

Frank's Writing Recrafting

Walt: looking carefully at punctuation to recraft writing.

Fill in the in the punctuation.

There are   7  full stops missing

There are   11  capital letters missing

There are   0  question marks missing

There are   3  commas missing

Robert and Jodie live in Newcastle one Saturday morning they went shopping with their parents they went to a big supermarket.

Robert pushed the shopping trolley, they bout bread milk with tea jam fruit and vegetables. Suddenly mother looked up where was Jodie she had become separated from the family.

Mother went to the desk, the lady did made an announcement over the loudspeaker  soon Jodie came to the desk, where had she been. She had been reading books in the book department.

Mother was pleased to see her daughter. at last now it was time to go home. Dad started the car and off they went it had been a busy day.

Frank maui's moa

Frank's speech.

WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.

Speech Marks:

‘Good morning,’ said the check-out lady. ‘Do you have your Fly Buys card?’

Joe had a really sore tummy. ‘I can’t go to school,’ he groaned.

‘I don't think so’ replied James.

‘Yes Bob’ replied. ‘That's what I'm going to do.’

‘Is that what you were after?’ asked Sally.

‘Hello,’ said Tony.

‘I want the ball’ yelled Bill to all the other players.

‘What’s the time’ asked Mark? ‘It’s 9 o’clock’ replied

Tom.

‘It isn't fair!’ he complained bitterly. ‘I always have to wash the dishes.’

‘Oh no!’ cried Jake. ‘I don't want to go swimming!’

‘What do you want to do?’ ‘when you grow up’ said John.

‘I don’t know’ replied Dan ‘I might be a pilot.’

I watched carefully as the teacher did the example. ‘Now have a go at doing it yourself’ she said. I still wasn’t sure so I asked her to go through it again.

‘What are your hobbies’ asked Jill.

‘Well’ said Jack’ I like collecting model car’s.

‘How dull laughed’ Jill. Jack sulked and wouldn’t speak to Jill for the rest of the day

‘I am tire’d the boy said and then drifted off to sleep.

The three little pigs

Once upon a time there were three little pigs saying goodbye to mum they all cried.

One older pig goes away and finds a place to make a house.

He finds hay and builds a house. 1 big hungry wolf comes and say’s come out little pig, but the pig said no. The wolf huffed and puff and blu blu it’s house a way, the pig ran but the wolf was too fast so got to the pig and ripped his meat out and blood came dripping yum.

Another snotty pig comes and gets some sticks to build a house. The wolf comes and says “Open the door my pig it’s me your mother I just want  to say something.” But when the pig look out of the window he saw a hairy big wolf, the pig says “your not my mum.” Then the big bad wolf huffed puffed blew as hard as he can the sticks fell down. The wolf gets the pig and rips it’s skin off like a candy floss.

Then the last smartest pig build a mansion out of bricks. The big bad wolf comes along and knocks on the door. The pig replied “ Not by the hair of my chinny chin chin”The big bad wolf comes and “says then I will blow your manchin into trash” He blows and blows but doesn't make a move so he blows again and again but nothing still happen so climbed up the chimney and falls down onto the wood.

The pig saw him and ran out into the woods. The wolf runs and looks for it he finds it and then the wolf takes a big bite. But the wolf misses and got killed by a man who went hunting.

And one little pig went home happily after all THE END.

Maths activity