I was marching down to the hall thinking about something that’s way cooler then the hall because it was always boring. However, when our class walked inside we saw Mrs Verry sitting on this chair. Mrs Verry had grown old since we last saw her. I felt sad when I saw her on this chair.
Sitting down I looked over at her still thinking why was she sitting on that chair. Mr Burt then said hello to Mrs Verry, then he said something about her retiring.
I was going to cry when I heard him say that she was retiring because she had grown too old. She is a nice lady, even though sometimes when we got in trouble she would growl. Mr Burt said she was a SUPER SUPER SUPER GRANNY.
When I saw the girls walking up. They said something that was spichael about her. When they finished talking about her they went up and did a Samoan dance. Far out, what mean girls presenting that dance for Mrs Verry ay.
I said to myself and to my friends, when they finished I thought that was cool when I heard someone that came out of the blues and just said CHAHOO.
This was the first time that I was almost, going to cry.I thought about it now, I knew why Mrs Verry was on that chair.
At the Paralympics when Richard finished his race he jumped into the sky waving his flag in the air. He was so filled with happiness when he won his gold medal when he came first. Sadly he has no legs so he runs on prosthetic legs that can jump high.
Walking down to Tommy Wilson. He is a really good famous man who writes books that can make our grumpy smile turns into a happy smile. He traveled everywhere in the globe to have a job and make people smile.
Sitting on our bottom we were so excited to hear his jokes talk that makes us laugh. And but he said the main thing thats really important to us is war is dumb in the hole why world his dad was in the world war then he came back because tommy said war is dumb. Then I thought about it I said to myself that is right because if you can’t stop it you will end up in your grave.
So then he traveled to america to have a job and make a guy smile how was a famous man how made a ship thats really enormous then a dinosaur. And he has 11 fararooy that's faster then all cars mean aye bro.
Re - Crafting aldorat@pes.blogspot.com Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second is mine. I had fun running the whole track with my friends. It was awesome, and most of all it’s fun hearing about your friends achieving their goals. It was an amazing day.
Around the track I had fun running with my friends.Hearing about my friends achieving their goals, it made the day awesome.
