Frank Almost Past

There was a cow who was lazy named 390. They were going to The Mad Butchers to be made into meat. 390 did not know where she was going. It was a horrible day the weather was snowy and cold.

So they went to the Mad Butcher’s meat factory. The road was snowy and rocky. But they still went, the wheel was stuck the man was angry he stepped on the wheel RRRRRRRRRRRRRRR MMMMMMMMMM the car went flying in the air. 390 jumped off flew all the way down SSS PPP HHHHH the car crashed into the pole.

390 was still blacked out the cow woke up she moo and moo no one heard her. A Woman came down to go shopping but she saw a truck that crashed she called 111 the ambulance came down. The driver was alright but he was looking for 390 but he couldn’t find her so they all went home.

The cow was still crying for help but then a dog comes. Ruff ruff a man comes and say oh no he carries him up. the cow is happy.

Frank reading Rousie

Thinking if it's good or bad

I hope you learn't more

frank math activity 1

Being a dairy farmer

Frank's cross country 2013

 Plan my recount carefully so I am clear about what I am writing and why

Walking to our run we had to sit on the concrete. Waiting for the juniors to do there run, everyone got so hot that they were just cheering. Trying to go to the shade but my teacher said ‘no.’ I said to Miss Garden if I ‘could go to the toilet’ she said ‘yes.’

I went to the toilet and put water on my face I got so chilled. I went back out and sat on the concrete, it was almost time for our run. Then it was time, we went to track Mr burt said ‘On your mark GO we ran down the mud some people were gathering in front of me I got tired but I

had to just keep going because my mum told me if you win this I might go to warehouse.

So I ran hard when I got to the reserve mud just smashed onto my face. Once I looked back some of the runners were mucking around in the mud. I thought I might come first th but I saw Sione  was coming in the lead I didn’t want that to happen.

So I went hard, I catched up to number 10. I was so wearing but then I went past and was sprinting so fast I got to the corners mud just went every where my eyes blinked and my hips was crunched up together I thought I needed to go to the doctors. I went to finished line I was so happy once I saw that finish line.

I was finish and took a break and drank one cup of cold water. I went to wash my feets and went inside my classroom. The end

Frank's Writing Recrafting

Walt: looking carefully at punctuation to recraft writing.

Fill in the in the punctuation.

There are   7  full stops missing

There are   11  capital letters missing

There are   0  question marks missing

There are   3  commas missing

Robert and Jodie live in Newcastle one Saturday morning they went shopping with their parents they went to a big supermarket.

Robert pushed the shopping trolley, they bout bread milk with tea jam fruit and vegetables. Suddenly mother looked up where was Jodie she had become separated from the family.

Mother went to the desk, the lady did made an announcement over the loudspeaker  soon Jodie came to the desk, where had she been. She had been reading books in the book department.

Mother was pleased to see her daughter. at last now it was time to go home. Dad started the car and off they went it had been a busy day.

Frank maui's moa

Frank's speech.

WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.

Speech Marks:

‘Good morning,’ said the check-out lady. ‘Do you have your Fly Buys card?’

Joe had a really sore tummy. ‘I can’t go to school,’ he groaned.

‘I don't think so’ replied James.

‘Yes Bob’ replied. ‘That's what I'm going to do.’

‘Is that what you were after?’ asked Sally.

‘Hello,’ said Tony.

‘I want the ball’ yelled Bill to all the other players.

‘What’s the time’ asked Mark? ‘It’s 9 o’clock’ replied

Tom.

‘It isn't fair!’ he complained bitterly. ‘I always have to wash the dishes.’

‘Oh no!’ cried Jake. ‘I don't want to go swimming!’

‘What do you want to do?’ ‘when you grow up’ said John.

‘I don’t know’ replied Dan ‘I might be a pilot.’

I watched carefully as the teacher did the example. ‘Now have a go at doing it yourself’ she said. I still wasn’t sure so I asked her to go through it again.

‘What are your hobbies’ asked Jill.

‘Well’ said Jack’ I like collecting model car’s.

‘How dull laughed’ Jill. Jack sulked and wouldn’t speak to Jill for the rest of the day

‘I am tire’d the boy said and then drifted off to sleep.

The three little pigs

Once upon a time there were three little pigs saying goodbye to mum they all cried.

One older pig goes away and finds a place to make a house.

He finds hay and builds a house. 1 big hungry wolf comes and say’s come out little pig, but the pig said no. The wolf huffed and puff and blu blu it’s house a way, the pig ran but the wolf was too fast so got to the pig and ripped his meat out and blood came dripping yum.

Another snotty pig comes and gets some sticks to build a house. The wolf comes and says “Open the door my pig it’s me your mother I just want  to say something.” But when the pig look out of the window he saw a hairy big wolf, the pig says “your not my mum.” Then the big bad wolf huffed puffed blew as hard as he can the sticks fell down. The wolf gets the pig and rips it’s skin off like a candy floss.

Then the last smartest pig build a mansion out of bricks. The big bad wolf comes along and knocks on the door. The pig replied “ Not by the hair of my chinny chin chin”The big bad wolf comes and “says then I will blow your manchin into trash” He blows and blows but doesn't make a move so he blows again and again but nothing still happen so climbed up the chimney and falls down onto the wood.

The pig saw him and ran out into the woods. The wolf runs and looks for it he finds it and then the wolf takes a big bite. But the wolf misses and got killed by a man who went hunting.

And one little pig went home happily after all THE END.

Maths activity

Bailee vs Sebastian

The red is Sebastian The blue one is balee

going to the swimming pools with my brothers

I was bored at home so I went to my friend’s . I knock knock knock  on the door no one was

there so I went to the library. My friends wasn’t there only pehso and henry then someone got monopoly lucky they knew how to play, not like my friends at school.

“FAR it’s hot I said” this boy came in and he “said do you want to go to the pools” “I said yes please”. We RUSHED into the pools I put my tog s on and I jumped in the pools SPLASH It was freezing I didn’t felt my legs it was just shivering. My friend was laughing at me hahaha he said I went out and said to the lifeguards any warm pools yes said the lifeguard there is one in the corner.

I went in it was relaxing then I saw my brother he was death his name was Whiti. He jumped in SPLASH some went in my eye it really stinged Yahweh I said then the lifeguard came and said what’s all that racket all about some one said it was me the he told me to go and sit down for 5 hour’s man that will make me have to watch them play. I got bored and went to buy me some chips when I got there and I put my hands in my pocket I felt nothing but dust.

I slammed my hand to my face Oh Man I got so angry I felt like I was going to EXPLODE and went home and then watch tv, then my brother came to me and said don’t cry it’s ok man. Then I cried and my brother sign to i’m the one to make you better tell mum to cheer you up and stop crying.

Runing

Jogging down to the reserve we all walked to the starting line at the reserve. The 10 and 9 year old boys were ready to sprint all the way to tamaki college and all the way back to Pt -England. As Mr Burt said on your marks get set GO as I ran towards the bridge I was hoping I would came first in the finals. If I did come first I will be proud of myself but I didn't and I felt disappointed about my self.


As I was running through the bushes I was going to fall down. On slippery bridge and into the water. Well I was running down the bush it felt really exhausted. I was almost at the finished line and I felt so tired!!! Finally I crossed the finished line and everyone was cheering me on.


We were washing our legs because our legs were dirty because of the mud. Looking at all that water made me so thirsty. When I was done wishing the mud off my legs I quickly had the biggest drink of water ever.Then we sat down on the ground and watch every one that had to race and after that we went to room 17 because Miss King

The band

Omaru creek Animation

Counting in two's

1.      Counting in two's

My first teast

The Bush Walk 1

Walking down to omeru creek with our literacy group. I really don’t like going there because I could smell something very bad but I ignored it and went with my literacy group. We were following the creek.It was a very long way, I wanted a rest but Mr marks “said keep going Frank wheel make it he said”. The girls didn’t catch up, so then Mr Marks send Marama to the back.

I didn’t want to go at the back so I sticked with the others at the front. We almost got there but we waited for the girls to come. They came last so then they missed out on their lunch.

We carried  on walking there we where we were there. Yes it was cool when the dirty water was going far far away. I was proud of myself walking that far. but we could if took the bus. But Nah.