Frank Almost Past

There was a cow who was lazy named 390. They were going to The Mad Butchers to be made into meat. 390 did not know where she was going. It was a horrible day the weather was snowy and cold.

So they went to the Mad Butcher’s meat factory. The road was snowy and rocky. But they still went, the wheel was stuck the man was angry he stepped on the wheel RRRRRRRRRRRRRRR MMMMMMMMMM the car went flying in the air. 390 jumped off flew all the way down SSS PPP HHHHH the car crashed into the pole.

390 was still blacked out the cow woke up she moo and moo no one heard her. A Woman came down to go shopping but she saw a truck that crashed she called 111 the ambulance came down. The driver was alright but he was looking for 390 but he couldn’t find her so they all went home.

The cow was still crying for help but then a dog comes. Ruff ruff a man comes and say oh no he carries him up. the cow is happy.

Thinking if it's good or bad

I hope you learn't more

Frank's Writing Recrafting

Walt: looking carefully at punctuation to recraft writing.

Fill in the in the punctuation.

There are   7  full stops missing

There are   11  capital letters missing

There are   0  question marks missing

There are   3  commas missing

Robert and Jodie live in Newcastle one Saturday morning they went shopping with their parents they went to a big supermarket.

Robert pushed the shopping trolley, they bout bread milk with tea jam fruit and vegetables. Suddenly mother looked up where was Jodie she had become separated from the family.

Mother went to the desk, the lady did made an announcement over the loudspeaker  soon Jodie came to the desk, where had she been. She had been reading books in the book department.

Mother was pleased to see her daughter. at last now it was time to go home. Dad started the car and off they went it had been a busy day.

the Animation frog

Once upon a time there were one frog and she had 15 babys one popes out of his
little egg and all of the hope out.

The ugly spider

Once a upon a time there was a spider called wincy.  Before he use to like his house  but now

we ripe his house. Wincy got angry at as then he bit my hand then I cried about my hand and then

it went a way. Miss King

Usain Bolt finals

“Take your marks said the umpire, the 200m sprinting final was about to start.Visulising the race, Usain Bolt (yes, it’s him) was ready for anything.

As the gun went off, Usain was blitzing everyone. Swiftly speeding down the track, the naturally gifted athlete was focusing on the finish. The worlds fastest was unbeaten for the 2nd time!

Celebrating his victory Usain did his winning pose. It seems like no-one ever beaten Usain in the last two Olympics. I wonder what his future is? Only time will tell.

Frank at the beach

Hopping into the car I thought about where we should go on a sunny day. When I stared out the window I saw a beautiful beach. “Mummy mummy can we go to the beach? I cried to my mum.

My mum said “OK, but only if you take your brother Mikey.” I said ok  mum then I ran out of the car and burst into the sea. Splash a tsunami came towards me. I yelled, “Out! Get out of the water”.

Mike said “What?” I yelled out “There is a tsunami in your way.” Sadly, the tsunami splashed into him. I ran to him, I saw sharks coming towards him.

I got my knife out and ran towards the sharks. I jumped up as high as I could and jumped on a shark’s back. I stabbed them as much as I could to keep them away from Mikey. The biggest shark of all came towards us.  

I ran up to him and stabbed him in the eye and ripped his eye off. He bit my hand. I got so mad I ran up and ripped his head off. I ran to Mikey and said  “Are you alright?”. He opened his eyes slowly.  

Mikey said “What happen to your arm?” “ I got bit by a shark”.
I replied. My mum yelled out my name “Frank Frank where are you?”

Cross Country

Re - Crafting

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Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second is mine.

I had fun running the whole track with my friends. It was awesome, and most of all it’s fun hearing about your friends achieving their goals. It was an amazing day.

Around the track I had fun running with my friends.Hearing about my friends achieving their goals, it made the day awesome.

Champion relay team

The Modern Pentathlon

Usain Bolts finals

“Take your marks said the umpire, the 200m sprinting final was about to start.Visulising                                                                                                                         the race, Usain Bolt (yes, it’s him) was ready for anything.

As the gun went off, Usain was blitzing everyone. Swiftly speeding down the track, the naturally gifted athlete was focusing on the finish. The worlds fastest was unbeaten for the 2nd time!

Celebrating his victory Usain did his winning pose. It seems like no-one ever beaten Usain in the last two Olympics. I wonder what his future is? Only time will tell.
    

Valerie Adams

Talented athlete Valerie adams,was celebrating enthusiastically at the olympic stadium.
Celebrating enthusiastically a talented athlete was running around the stadium.
Enthusiastically Celebrating, the talented athletes carried the flag around the stadium.

A Big Cross Country

Every day this term we have been practising our cross country at Pt England School. Yesterday was the big day. It was a warm afternoon , and year 5 and six made their way to the courts. Mr Somerville gave us instructions of where we would be running. I listened carefully so that I knew what I needed to do.

We ran all the way to the beach, then past Mr Burt’s house.I felt tired when we jogged along the beach.I ran past Zion at the beach. I was hating every minute because I was so exhausted. My legs ached, I didn’t feel fit. Even though my legs ached I was determined to get to the end.

When I reached the finish line I was relieved and excited. Next time I hope I come first, my goal is to keep up with my  friends. To get fit I will practise at home. Overall, I am proud of
myself for participating in the cross the country.

Snow Day

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Catching a snowflake on your tongue feels cold like ice cream. A magical winter wonderland of pristine   whiteness sprinkling over the ground snowflake transform the landscape. Snow is so cold.

Skidding and sliding on the ice a servestrom closed the road. The police have said for people to take care. Schools are closed due to ice and freezing temperature.

Frank writing

composition IV
is mix
of swerling
and soaring

the Painting is divided strongly down the center with by thick black vertical lines. On the left hand side violent motion is expressed by sharp jagged tangled lines. on the right hand side are calm emotions using

Painting
violent motion
center
thick and strong
writing left
strongle

the dividing lines are really two sword held by red halted cossacks. Next to them a third write bearded  cossacks leans against pulpal sword. They stand before a blue motion with a castillo on top.

purple sourd rainbow
castillo
stand befor
cossack

In the lower left two boats are depicted and a rainbow. In the lower right two people lie on a hill while two priests are watching them.

kandinsky Art

A type of art that showsthings exactly as they appearin life

A type of art started in france. Bold colourful pictures usually of outdoor scenes.A type of art started in france. Bold colourful pictures usually of outdoor scenes.A type of art using shapes to show felings.

Docs  not show objects as they appear in real life.

Frank Swimming

We were going to the pool, “Cool” I said to Jordan.
Then when we got there we got changed into our togs
Some people shoved into the shower. “Hurry up” I said to the boys  

When i was finished I hopped into the pool “it’s cold” I said to my friend. “Just wait it will get warm.” Ben shouted loudly “GO swim over there and come back” I rushed all the way to the end.

My eyes were red when I looked at Jordan, he looked like a mermaid  swimming down the pool.
Who cares about him? I can win this! Sadly he won. I got angry so bad.   

Meet The Ghost pipfish

The Ornate Ghost Pipefish or Solenostomus paradoxus is one of the hardest fish to spot in the ocean.  First of all they are relatively small, only growing to about 12cm in maximum length.  This gostogether with the fact that their bodies look more like coral or seaweed than an actual saltwater fish, makes them a master of ghost pipfish.

The mobius Strip

Starting a Monday with a movie Room 13 all watched exciting experiment using a paper strip. Can we have a go? Quickly Miss King got all the epuipment organised.
First we folded our paper with a half twist and joined the ends with sellotap. We cut our paper we long ways. Wondening what would happen, we all held our breath. Magicaly, our expeiment worked Mobius strip are so intriging.

Kayaking at Camp

The respecteblez were going kayaking. When we got there Mr Burt was there. He told us the instructions, when he was finished we hopped into the kayak. The waves were crashing towards the boat and I capsized. Boom! The kayak was on top of me. Mr Malloy was rushing towards me telling me to hop back on the kayak. Mr Malloy grabbed my hand and he pulled me up. I felt relieved. When I got on Mr Malloy’s boat I felt cold.