James Has Found A New World

James was going bush walk it was his first time. James got everything packed, so he left and went bush walk. Well he was walking he looked at his map see where he was going.

He thought he knew where he was going but he didn’t so he looked again at his map there were no signs. Ssssssssssss he looked back he said ‘who’s there’ no one replied. James ran fast as he could but all he could see was only trees.

James grabbed his phone and dialed 111 beeb beeb beeb the phone crashed. James heart was pounding like he had a heart attack. It started raining a whisper called ‘go away.’

But James fallows where the whisper came from. James stop he was in the middle of no where. He looked where the bush was he touched and pushed the bush, he went forward dunk dank

he knocked his head on the steppes ‘ouch.’

He saw a tiny and grabbed him out of a bed. It woke up he yelled ‘ahhhhhhhhhhh all the other tiny people came MONSTER MONSTER they all got their swords, they started throwing their swords ‘ouch what are you doing’ tiny people said ‘you're the monster we were trying to find you so you can hunting our village down.’ ‘Well it wasn’t me’ replied james.

The captain said ‘I’m so sorry for our mistake’ everyone was friends ALMOST.

                                 TO BE CONTINUED 2014 on cinemas

Retell a boy turning into a doll

Skipping down the footpath there was snow flakes dropping down the sky I thought that was cool. I had almost forgotten that it was my birthday. I wrote my name Alma on the whiteboard, like all the kids do in my town. It is tradition on everyone’s tenth birthday.

I looked behind me, and there was a doll that had the same coat as me, and same gloves as me. It was in a shop, a spooky shop . I stared at the other dolls, they looked just like some of my friends who had gone missing.

I thought that it was cool but also a little bit freaky. I ran towards the doll, I wanted to have it but the door was locked. I got mad, made a snowball and threw it towards the door. It didn’t open,  so I walked away. While stamping off, the door creaked open. I quickly came back, and puched the door open wide.

I walked to the doll on the piano I stepped on a doll that was on a bike I made it stand it was going for the door the door locked. It looked like it was trying to escape I looked backed it disappear I looked every where but it wasn't there I looked on the shelves it was there I crowed up the cache. I was reaching so high I touch it's noise ZAP???

I was a doll I tried to move my legs but I couldn't. Not even my body I could only move my eyes.
My breath got heavy.

The dolls were trying to warn me to not touch the doll but I had not listened.