The ugly spider

Once a upon a time there was a spider called wincy.  Before he use to like his house  but now

we ripe his house. Wincy got angry at as then he bit my hand then I cried about my hand and then

it went a way. Miss King

Usain Bolt finals

“Take your marks said the umpire, the 200m sprinting final was about to start.Visulising the race, Usain Bolt (yes, it’s him) was ready for anything.

As the gun went off, Usain was blitzing everyone. Swiftly speeding down the track, the naturally gifted athlete was focusing on the finish. The worlds fastest was unbeaten for the 2nd time!

Celebrating his victory Usain did his winning pose. It seems like no-one ever beaten Usain in the last two Olympics. I wonder what his future is? Only time will tell.

Runing

Jogging down to the reserve we all walked to the starting line at the reserve. The 10 and 9 year old boys were ready to sprint all the way to tamaki college and all the way back to Pt -England. As Mr Burt said on your marks get set GO as I ran towards the bridge I was hoping I would came first in the finals. If I did come first I will be proud of myself but I didn't and I felt disappointed about my self.


As I was running through the bushes I was going to fall down. On slippery bridge and into the water. Well I was running down the bush it felt really exhausted. I was almost at the finished line and I felt so tired!!! Finally I crossed the finished line and everyone was cheering me on.


We were washing our legs because our legs were dirty because of the mud. Looking at all that water made me so thirsty. When I was done wishing the mud off my legs I quickly had the biggest drink of water ever.Then we sat down on the ground and watch every one that had to race and after that we went to room 17 because Miss King

Frank's 3D map

Frank's Show Jackson 5

jackson 5 christmas song from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

2012 Manaiakalani Reflection

I enjoy blog posting on peoples blog and sharing my document to the world.
And it’s more better than just writing on peace of paper and a pencil. My goals are writing narratives and reading hard books to learn more of stuff that I don’t know.

And the coolest part is we have a site that we can go on. We learn by sharing and creating.

TANGRAM

Tangram

 

This is a shape that is a Tangram there is a site to it thank you

Manaiakalani Film Festival

Have you ever been to the Manaiakalani Film Festival? Well I have. It was the best thing I ever been to , because you get to watch great events that all the school share in their movies..
It is always at Hoyts in Sylva Park on the Extreme Screen. It’s cool.

Retell a boy turning into a doll

Skipping down the footpath there was snow flakes dropping down the sky I thought that was cool. I had almost forgotten that it was my birthday. I wrote my name Alma on the whiteboard, like all the kids do in my town. It is tradition on everyone’s tenth birthday.

I looked behind me, and there was a doll that had the same coat as me, and same gloves as me. It was in a shop, a spooky shop . I stared at the other dolls, they looked just like some of my friends who had gone missing.

I thought that it was cool but also a little bit freaky. I ran towards the doll, I wanted to have it but the door was locked. I got mad, made a snowball and threw it towards the door. It didn’t open,  so I walked away. While stamping off, the door creaked open. I quickly came back, and puched the door open wide.

I walked to the doll on the piano I stepped on a doll that was on a bike I made it stand it was going for the door the door locked. It looked like it was trying to escape I looked backed it disappear I looked every where but it wasn't there I looked on the shelves it was there I crowed up the cache. I was reaching so high I touch it's noise ZAP???

I was a doll I tried to move my legs but I couldn't. Not even my body I could only move my eyes.
My breath got heavy.

The dolls were trying to warn me to not touch the doll but I had not listened.

Frank Swinging on the swing

Running down the hills all the way to the park thinking which swing should I go on. The big swing or the little swing he said I want to go on the big swing. But out of nowhere he just push me and got on the swing.

Ha ha ha he said showing off to these girls. He used to come to school but then he was not allowed to come back  for being a bully. His name is jack he always ask for lunch.

If they didn't gave their lunch they will get beaten up in the head. I feel sorry for them, then I talk back after that I get a hiding from him for being a egg. Now i’m going to fight back just for a swing.

“He looked at me and said what are you looking at he said”. I was still looking at him, he got scared and push me off the park and jack said get lost loser BUT it was true, I was a loser at  playing wrestling. “I said get off the swing now” “he said what you going to do about it he laughed”.

”I said I’m going to give you a hiding he got off and said you take it I don’t want it. He Started running away and said ahhh. I thought now i’m strong. Yes i said yes.

Frank at the beach

Hopping into the car I thought about where we should go on a sunny day. When I stared out the window I saw a beautiful beach. “Mummy mummy can we go to the beach? I cried to my mum.

My mum said “OK, but only if you take your brother Mikey.” I said ok  mum then I ran out of the car and burst into the sea. Splash a tsunami came towards me. I yelled, “Out! Get out of the water”.

Mike said “What?” I yelled out “There is a tsunami in your way.” Sadly, the tsunami splashed into him. I ran to him, I saw sharks coming towards him.

I got my knife out and ran towards the sharks. I jumped up as high as I could and jumped on a shark’s back. I stabbed them as much as I could to keep them away from Mikey. The biggest shark of all came towards us.  

I ran up to him and stabbed him in the eye and ripped his eye off. He bit my hand. I got so mad I ran up and ripped his head off. I ran to Mikey and said  “Are you alright?”. He opened his eyes slowly.  

Mikey said “What happen to your arm?” “ I got bit by a shark”.
I replied. My mum yelled out my name “Frank Frank where are you?”

Ninja vs clown

Ninja Ash ran towards his house, when he went inside. His brother Ben wanted some lollies from trick or treat. Ninja Ash yelled no and ran to his mum and cried “Give Ben a hiding.” Mum said “No” and walked away, Ninja Ash hid in the basement Ben heard him hiding in the basement.

Ben was scared when he walked down the steps. Ninja Ash grabbed his knife and stabbed him in the finger and threw the knife at the wall. Ben was afraid and called Ninja Ash who jumped up and frightened him. Ben yelled out “Mummy mummy.” and ran towards the steps and through the door. Ninja won and said i might be a superhero.’’

Jumping off a roof

Along time ago in New Mexico there was a flood, a lot of kids were playing in a flood causing trouble amongst houses and splashing water onto clothes.
There was a kid whose name was Jamain. He climbed up to the very top because his friend dared him to do it. so he jumped off the roof because he wanted to be the man.
He landed on his stomach he tried to get up but he couldn't.  Water was covering his face. His upper body was pounding with pain and couldn't breath that much. A random friend reached out to his hand and took him to his brother Steven Fox.

Steven Fox took him to the hospital because he had been injured. When he opened his eye his mum was so enthusiastic because Jamain was still alive that was good thing.
When they got back  stevens back side was red as superman's cape. After that the flood dried up everyone took the stuff down and put them back where they were. All the kids were bored without a  water anywhere to be seen.

Jamain came back home he was pleased to see his friends and family. his friends

ran and up to jamain and hugged him to heaven.

What is a toy

Room thirteen  just discover what they find out ???          

Salon Alpin

Much Better Now from Salon Alpin on Vimeo.


I hoped you like it.

                           THE END

50 Words Story

At the Paralympics when Richard finished his race he jumped into the sky waving his flag in the air. He was so filled with happiness when he won his gold medal when he came first. Sadly he has no legs so he runs on prosthetic legs that can jump high.

Tommy Kapai Wilson

Walking down to Tommy Wilson. He is a  really good famous man who writes books that can make  our grumpy smile turns into a happy smile. He traveled everywhere in the globe to have a job and make people smile.


Sitting on our bottom we were so excited to hear his jokes talk that makes us laugh.
And but he said the main thing thats really important to us is war is dumb in the hole why
world his dad was in the world war then he came back  because tommy said war is dumb. Then I thought about it I said to myself that is right because if you can’t stop it
you will end up in your grave.


So then he traveled to america to have a job and make a guy smile how was a famous man how made a ship thats really enormous then a dinosaur. And he has 11 fararooy that's faster then all cars mean aye bro.  

Cross Country

Re - Crafting

aldorat@pes.blogspot.com

Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second is mine.

I had fun running the whole track with my friends. It was awesome, and most of all it’s fun hearing about your friends achieving their goals. It was an amazing day.

Around the track I had fun running with my friends.Hearing about my friends achieving their goals, it made the day awesome.

Champion relay team

Liu Xiang failed on his 100m finals

With the crowd cheering and feeling famous I entered into the olympic stadium ready for the 1110m hurdles.waiting on the starting blocks I feel nervous as I know if I lose my whole country will be disappointed. “Take your marks get set go!

Powerfly exploding out of the blocks,I looked at the first hurdle. I hit my lead foot. Crashing to the ground, I grabbed my achilles tendon, it felt painful. Angrily,I sat in my lane, furious with myself.

Hopping out of the stadium. I wanted a way out from the embarrassment. I  was too nervous to go home as everyone will be the track where I kissed, the last hurdle to say goodbye. My friends came to help me. A disappointing end to my olympic dream.