Skipping down the footpath there was snow flakes dropping down the sky I thought that was cool. I had almost forgotten that it was my birthday. I wrote my name Alma on the whiteboard, like all the kids do in my town. It is tradition on everyone’s tenth birthday.
I looked behind me, and there was a doll that had the same coat as me, and same gloves as me. It was in a shop, a spooky shop . I stared at the other dolls, they looked just like some of my friends who had gone missing.
I thought that it was cool but also a little bit freaky. I ran towards the doll, I wanted to have it but the door was locked. I got mad, made a snowball and threw it towards the door. It didn’t open, so I walked away. While stamping off, the door creaked open. I quickly came back, and puched the door open wide.
I walked to the doll on the piano I stepped on a doll that was on a bike I made it stand it was going for the door the door locked. It looked like it was trying to escape I looked backed it disappear I looked every where but it wasn't there I looked on the shelves it was there I crowed up the cache. I was reaching so high I touch it's noise ZAP???
I was a doll I tried to move my legs but I couldn't. Not even my body I could only move my eyes.
My breath got heavy.
The dolls were trying to warn me to not touch the doll but I had not listened.
I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 4 and my teacher is Mrs. Moala.
Tuesday, 13 November 2012
Retell a boy turning into a doll
Monday, 12 November 2012
Monday, 29 October 2012
Frank Swinging on the swing
Running down the hills all the way to the park thinking which swing should I go on. The big swing or the little swing he said I want to go on the big swing. But out of nowhere he just push me and got on the swing.
Ha ha ha he said showing off to these girls. He used to come to school but then he was not allowed to come back for being a bully. His name is jack he always ask for lunch.
If they didn't gave their lunch they will get beaten up in the head. I feel sorry for them, then I talk back after that I get a hiding from him for being a egg. Now i’m going to fight back just for a swing.
“He looked at me and said what are you looking at he said”. I was still looking at him, he got scared and push me off the park and jack said get lost loser BUT it was true, I was a loser at playing wrestling. “I said get off the swing now” “he said what you going to do about it he laughed”.
”I said I’m going to give you a hiding he got off and said you take it I don’t want it. He Started running away and said ahhh. I thought now i’m strong. Yes i said yes.
Ha ha ha he said showing off to these girls. He used to come to school but then he was not allowed to come back for being a bully. His name is jack he always ask for lunch.
If they didn't gave their lunch they will get beaten up in the head. I feel sorry for them, then I talk back after that I get a hiding from him for being a egg. Now i’m going to fight back just for a swing.
“He looked at me and said what are you looking at he said”. I was still looking at him, he got scared and push me off the park and jack said get lost loser BUT it was true, I was a loser at playing wrestling. “I said get off the swing now” “he said what you going to do about it he laughed”.
”I said I’m going to give you a hiding he got off and said you take it I don’t want it. He Started running away and said ahhh. I thought now i’m strong. Yes i said yes.
Wednesday, 24 October 2012
Frank at the beach
Hopping into the car I thought about where we should go on a sunny day. When I stared out the window I saw a beautiful beach. “Mummy mummy can we go to the beach? I cried to my mum.
My mum said “OK, but only if you take your brother Mikey.” I said ok mum then I ran out of the car and burst into the sea. Splash a tsunami came towards me. I yelled, “Out! Get out of the water”.
Mike said “What?” I yelled out “There is a tsunami in your way.” Sadly, the tsunami splashed into him. I ran to him, I saw sharks coming towards him.
I got my knife out and ran towards the sharks. I jumped up as high as I could and jumped on a shark’s back. I stabbed them as much as I could to keep them away from Mikey. The biggest shark of all came towards us.
I ran up to him and stabbed him in the eye and ripped his eye off. He bit my hand. I got so mad I ran up and ripped his head off. I ran to Mikey and said “Are you alright?”. He opened his eyes slowly.
Mikey said “What happen to your arm?” “ I got bit by a shark”.
I replied. My mum yelled out my name “Frank Frank where are you?”
My mum said “OK, but only if you take your brother Mikey.” I said ok mum then I ran out of the car and burst into the sea. Splash a tsunami came towards me. I yelled, “Out! Get out of the water”.
Mike said “What?” I yelled out “There is a tsunami in your way.” Sadly, the tsunami splashed into him. I ran to him, I saw sharks coming towards him.
I got my knife out and ran towards the sharks. I jumped up as high as I could and jumped on a shark’s back. I stabbed them as much as I could to keep them away from Mikey. The biggest shark of all came towards us.
I ran up to him and stabbed him in the eye and ripped his eye off. He bit my hand. I got so mad I ran up and ripped his head off. I ran to Mikey and said “Are you alright?”. He opened his eyes slowly.
Mikey said “What happen to your arm?” “ I got bit by a shark”.
I replied. My mum yelled out my name “Frank Frank where are you?”
Friday, 19 October 2012
Ninja vs clown
Ninja Ash ran towards his house, when he went inside. His brother Ben wanted some lollies from trick or treat. Ninja Ash yelled no and ran to his mum and cried “Give Ben a hiding.” Mum said “No” and walked away, Ninja Ash hid in the basement Ben heard him hiding in the basement.
Ben was scared when he walked down the steps. Ninja Ash grabbed his knife and stabbed him in the finger and threw the knife at the wall. Ben was afraid and called Ninja Ash who jumped up and frightened him. Ben yelled out “Mummy mummy.” and ran towards the steps and through the door. Ninja won and said i might be a superhero.’’
Ben was scared when he walked down the steps. Ninja Ash grabbed his knife and stabbed him in the finger and threw the knife at the wall. Ben was afraid and called Ninja Ash who jumped up and frightened him. Ben yelled out “Mummy mummy.” and ran towards the steps and through the door. Ninja won and said i might be a superhero.’’
Tuesday, 16 October 2012
Jumping off a roof
Along time ago in New Mexico there was a flood, a lot of kids were playing in a flood causing trouble amongst houses and splashing water onto clothes.
There was a kid whose name was Jamain. He climbed up to the very top because his friend dared him to do it. so he jumped off the roof because he wanted to be the man.
He landed on his stomach he tried to get up but he couldn't. Water was covering his face. His upper body was pounding with pain and couldn't breath that much. A random friend reached out to his hand and took him to his brother Steven Fox.
Steven Fox took him to the hospital because he had been injured. When he opened his eye his mum was so enthusiastic because Jamain was still alive that was good thing.
When they got back stevens back side was red as superman's cape. After that the flood dried up everyone took the stuff down and put them back where they were. All the kids were bored without a water anywhere to be seen.
Jamain came back home he was pleased to see his friends and family. his friends
There was a kid whose name was Jamain. He climbed up to the very top because his friend dared him to do it. so he jumped off the roof because he wanted to be the man.
He landed on his stomach he tried to get up but he couldn't. Water was covering his face. His upper body was pounding with pain and couldn't breath that much. A random friend reached out to his hand and took him to his brother Steven Fox.
Steven Fox took him to the hospital because he had been injured. When he opened his eye his mum was so enthusiastic because Jamain was still alive that was good thing.
When they got back stevens back side was red as superman's cape. After that the flood dried up everyone took the stuff down and put them back where they were. All the kids were bored without a water anywhere to be seen.
Jamain came back home he was pleased to see his friends and family. his friends
Monday, 15 October 2012
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