Re - Crafting
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Today we practiced re-crafting a piece of writing The first paragraph belongs to Aldora and the second is mine.
I had fun running the whole track with my friends. It was awesome, and most of all it’s fun hearing about your friends achieving their goals. It was an amazing day.
Around the track I had fun running with my friends.Hearing about my friends achieving their goals, it made the day awesome.
2 comments:
good story the day was awesome the track was so muddy
Hey Frank
Cool blog post. I like that you used Speech and questions. It make your work better.
Keep up the good work
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